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Staring At Wet Rings

Lazily I stare at wet rings on the table One for the bottle and one for the empty glass The bottle lies still as I peel off the label And hope that her leaving like all bad things will pass - I smile through tears as I drink to that blue eyed lass 7/22/2017 Poetry contest Th Sound of Pages In The Night for Sara Kendrick

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Date: 8/13/2017 1:20:00 PM
Congrats on your placement with this wonderful write on the usual pair of pain and bottle. :) Sunita
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/13/2017 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Sunita.
Date: 8/11/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you for participating in my contest..I appreciate the time you took to write a poem just for the competition..Sara
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/13/2017 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sara...enjoyed the challenge!
Date: 7/24/2017 2:18:00 PM
I really love your poem, Larry! Good luck! :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/25/2017 10:01:00 PM
You're very kind, Alyssa! Thank you...Larry

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