Larry Bradfield Poet Quintain (English)

Staring At Wet Rings

Lazily I stare at wet rings on the table
One for the bottle and one for the empty glass
The bottle lies still as I peel off the label
And hope that her leaving like all bad things will pass -
I smile through tears as I drink to that blue eyed lass

7/22/2017
Poetry contest Th Sound of Pages In The Night for Sara Kendrick

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Sunita U.D Palawon August 13, 2017 at 1:20 PM Congrats on your placement with this wonderful write on the usual pair of pain and bottle. :) Sunita Larry Bradfield August 13, 2017 at 1:32 PM Thank you, Sunita.

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2017 at 3:01 PM Thank you for participating in my contest..I appreciate the time you took to write a poem just for the competition..Sara Larry Bradfield August 13, 2017 at 1:31 PM Thank you, Sara...enjoyed the challenge!

Alyssa Lorette July 24, 2017 at 2:18 PM I really love your poem, Larry! Good luck! :) Larry Bradfield July 25, 2017 at 10:01 PM You're very kind, Alyssa! Thank you...Larry