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Starfish

Starfish


I woke up this morning, my heart was filled with doubt.
I dreamed last night of love I learned I lived too long without.
An act of desperation in the midst of all my sorrow.
I stepped out in the rain and I cried out to tomorrow.

Why is it that you torment so? When I can clearly see.
Though you wait for someone, you do not wait for me.
I see lovers loving as they go about their way.
Still there is no one for me, at least not for today.

Like sun that hides behind a cloud or dreams just out of reach.
I'm stranded here in yesterday like a starfish on the beach.
Loneliness that lives in me surviving on my sorrow.
Alone I stood there in the rain and cried out to tomorrow.

Edwin C Hofert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:00 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
Hofert Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. God Bless!! Ed
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:45 PM
wow, that last stanza. I just really loved it and the emotion it evokes!
Hofert Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:56 PM
Thank you Andrea!! I am always incredibly grateful when a plan falls together :) And when i turn your head :) God bless!!
Smith Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Ed your tomorrow will come...believe me...I had three years of looking for tomorrow before I found her...you have a big heart any good woman would love to have for her own...this does NOT suck
Hofert Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:59 PM
LOL Thank you my friend. Most of the time being alone for me is a choice. Still there are those other times. Ya know? God bless!!
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 3:57 PM
aww In a way this reminds me of my 'sad Sammy starfish' poem Edwin - but Sammy found love in the end:-) - you never know who you might meet on the beach! :-) hugs Jan xx
Hofert Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 6:00 PM
LOL I heard Island girls like beaches LOL. God bless you Jan!!
Konos Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 3:15 PM
A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment. SEE I told you it sucked!
Hofert Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 3:21 PM
LOL I told you so's don't count Hahaha
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