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Stardust Serenade

Written: September 10, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In the tapestry of twilight's shroud, Where dreams and wonders are allowed, Jewel winks, shooting stars ignite, Guiding us through the cosmic night. A rubied mystery, the universe's womb Whispers secrets, casting gloom. But within this darkness, a symphony plays. A serenade of stardust, a celestial ballet Astral ditties dance on moonlit cobalt. Their melodies are enchanting, never to halt. Nestled on the wings of thunderbirds, They soar across the heavens, spreading words. Words of love, of hope, of dreams, Of endless possibilities, it seems. Strewing drizzles of diamond dust, They shimmer and sparkle in a cosmic gust. With each twinkle, a wish is made. As shooting stars glide and cascade. Their paths are a canvas, a masterpiece, A sight that fills the heart with peace. Argyle tapestry they weave, In patterns of love and belief, Lyrical luster of garnet ember, Igniting passion, extinguishing slumber On a summer night, they paint, Colors of wonder never faint. The stars, as diamonds, shine so bright. Guiding us through the endless night. Stardust serenade, a celestial hymn, Bringing comfort when the world feels grim So let us gaze upon the sky. And watch the shooting stars fly by. For in their beauty, we find solace and grace. A reminder of the magic in this vast space. Let the stardust serenade cram our hearts. And ignite within us a love that never departs.
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Hind Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 12:46 PM
I love the cosmic creations you create! A wonderful writing...
Volumes Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:34 PM
A wonderful poem of hope and glory. To gaze at the stars and feel all the power and wisdom of the universe is magical. An incredible poem SP
One Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:57 PM
You really know how to put a poem together with your own poetic uniqueness the lines flow so well and the imagery is in clear detail.. The opening stanza, In the tapestry of twilight's shroud, Where dreams and wonders are allowed, Jewel winks, shooting stars ignite, Guiding us through the cosmic night, is a poetic delight and really sets the scene for this poem.. Definitely a fave for me..
Callus Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 5:55 AM
What a strikingly delightful offering, Lassad! The vivid imagery catches the eye, though I could easily close my eyes, listen and let my imagination do the rest. ~ Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:50 AM
A rubied mystery, the universe's womb Whispers secrets, casting gloom. But within this darkness, a symphony plays. A serenade of stardust, a celestial ballet---How tremendous is this, my friend. You keep creating masterful poetic portraits, Lassad.
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:39 AM
My friend Sotto, this is another one of your jewels, celestial and glistening with ethereal imagery and rhymes that would easily be a fave of mine. The way you phrase and deliver thoughts is so creative and so profound. Im not sure whether I should praise your alliterations? How you’ve paired words like “ lyrical luster of garnet ember” “ wings of thunderbirds” etc every line feels like a panoramic capture that would leave your readers floating through lost on awe! So good! Impeccable write
Sharma  Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Dear Sotto, this flowed like the most mellifluous and saccharine silken wave of poetic phrases and created a magical ambience for the reader to dive in! Your lines flow like healing incantations and the wordplay is so mesmerizing as always.. Amidst the darkness and gloom, there's always one unique sparkle that oscillates in frequencies of hope.. "A serenade of stardust, a celestial ballet" Wow "and ignite within us a love that never departs", "lyrical lustre of garnet ember" Absolutely gorgeous!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:28 AM
This is a great cosmic serenade that displays your power of poetry. I read it twice to appreciate the beauty of it all.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 5:52 PM
This stardust serenade is magnificent Sotto, loved it from start to finish, lovely words but together splendidly with your amazing vocabulary…. Belle
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