Stardust Dreams

Softly sneaking off for solace 
in the warmth of your embrace,
chasing stardust peace in dreams,
drifting both in time and space

Am I rising but to fear,
or fearing but to rise?
Cloaked inside your arms of down
I'd shirk each day's surprise

I serve this endless sentence,
in the cozy cell that's you
the warden daren't commute it
unless stardust dreams come true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Holmes Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 11:53 PM
A cute write David...nice....and thanks for the comment ...Peter
Brown Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Peter, always a pleasure to read your work
Costales Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 7:00 PM
I love the 3rd line 1st verse esp..all verses though have held on to the image of stardust dreams..enjoyed
Brown Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thank you for the kind comments, Josefina
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