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Stardust Dreams

Softly sneaking off for solace in the warmth of your embrace, chasing stardust peace in dreams, drifting both in time and space Am I rising but to fear, or fearing but to rise? Cloaked inside your arms of down I'd shirk each day's surprise I serve this endless sentence, in the cozy cell that's you the warden daren't commute it unless stardust dreams come true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/20/2015 11:53:00 PM
A cute write David...nice....and thanks for the comment ...Peter
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David Brown
Date: 7/25/2015 3:53:00 PM
Thank you Peter, always a pleasure to read your work
Date: 7/16/2015 7:00:00 PM
I love the 3rd line 1st verse esp..all verses though have held on to the image of stardust dreams..enjoyed
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Date: 7/16/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments, Josefina

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