Stardust

Stardust flickers, falls
The tip of the iceberg
Warm current melts conscience
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Excellent haiku with awesome imagery! Well done with a 7! Pandita
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 8:57 AM
very clever haiku - love the imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
Stroh Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 8:59 AM
thanks Jan
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