Stardust

For tonight spread guests 
fragments bright
In a wonderful speed of light.
I wished this moment a kiss
For my love:my special Miss.
Lovely under this to run
Like we used under the sun,
For tonight spread guests 
fragments bright
In a wonderful speed of light.

GOODNESS LANRE
09/07/2013
Stardust in an octelle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 2:44 PM
check your syllable count on "lovely under to run" This one paints a pretty picture!
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