Stardust

Crying in a dark corner 
You curse all that is lost 
World may seem to be empty 
But its void that you've crossed 
You feel love is elusive 
You are just a speck in the crowd 
I will be the answer 
To all your doubts 

How can a man not love you 
You are the brightest of all 
Your not alone beautiful 
I followed your fall 
You pointed towards the sky 
And I knew before you sang 
Your voice is a melody 
Though I cant understand 

The silver that lines your face 
Is losing its glow 
The world wants a martyr 
Its not yours to do so 
We are angels no more 
We are such a shame 
You will succumb to hate here 
Go back from whence you came 

Love is all that you need 
To reach the stars again 
I will give my heart to you 
Coz i know the pain 
The silver glows once more 
And with it our distance too 
My hand holds just StarDust 
Its all thats left of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 22, 2010 at 1:02 PM
WOW! Oscar a very joyful poem. A little heart felt on the down side of the stardust. Still the holder of the star dust , what an imagination to keep them close to let the dust know its still in his hands. Awesome, have anice one,..Sidney LeeAnn
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June 8, 2010 at 11:19 PM
Wow. such a great poem. I love the rhyme scheme, the flow, the words, the idea. It's great all around.
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May 26, 2010 at 9:59 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Oscar. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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May 26, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Welcome Oscar and more writes for u .. great .. and entering the contests posted on Soup.. great way to get your poetry read... just a little "heads up" information.. welcome to the soup family of wonderful poets... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 25, 2010 at 8:39 AM
So enjoyed reading your creative write today Oscar.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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