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Stardust

Crying in a dark corner You curse all that is lost World may seem to be empty But its void that you've crossed You feel love is elusive You are just a speck in the crowd I will be the answer To all your doubts How can a man not love you You are the brightest of all Your not alone beautiful I followed your fall You pointed towards the sky And I knew before you sang Your voice is a melody Though I cant understand The silver that lines your face Is losing its glow The world wants a martyr Its not yours to do so We are angels no more We are such a shame You will succumb to hate here Go back from whence you came Love is all that you need To reach the stars again I will give my heart to you Coz i know the pain The silver glows once more And with it our distance too My hand holds just StarDust Its all thats left of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 1:02:00 PM
WOW! Oscar a very joyful poem. A little heart felt on the down side of the stardust. Still the holder of the star dust , what an imagination to keep them close to let the dust know its still in his hands. Awesome, have anice one,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/8/2010 11:19:00 PM
Wow. such a great poem. I love the rhyme scheme, the flow, the words, the idea. It's great all around.
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Oscar. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:05:00 AM
Welcome Oscar and more writes for u .. great .. and entering the contests posted on Soup.. great way to get your poetry read... just a little "heads up" information.. welcome to the soup family of wonderful poets... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:39:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your creative write today Oscar.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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