Stardom Crown

The dreams of life took my brain 
As I didn't allow it drain 
My peers went with the wind
Behind the crowd I stood at last
Some flew away with metal birds 
I went around with leggedies Benz
Stardom crown is hung afar
Chained with words
A symbol for comparison 
Undefined character in flesh 
Snail in human flesh 
Words from a close flesh
Adamant in my goals
Depending in the light 
Conscious in my unconscious world 
Seeking what could be found 
Before I part
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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November 26, 2024 at 7:49 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 8, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Ifediora, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 10, 2016 at 3:16 PM
hello ifediora okiche, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing -skat
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