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Stardom Crown

The dreams of life took my brain As I didn't allow it drain My peers went with the wind Behind the crowd I stood at last Some flew away with metal birds I went around with leggedies Benz Stardom crown is hung afar Chained with words A symbol for comparison Undefined character in flesh Snail in human flesh Words from a close flesh Adamant in my goals Depending in the light Conscious in my unconscious world Seeking what could be found Before I part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 11/26/2024 7:49:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:06:00 AM
Ifediora, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:16:00 PM
hello ifediora okiche, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing -skat
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