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Starbucks

ST*RBUCKS Steaming extremes Flowing vain brains Coercing candid collaborates Outrageous opiate orders Foamfaced flavour floating Failfaded fortune faking Endless empty entities Erasing epic eulogies Steaming extremes Bursting brain veins © Kim van Breda—16 November 2015

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Rainbow Promise

Date: 12/6/2015 6:47:00 PM

Nice write Kim. Enjoyed it this Sunday evening. Hugs, RP.

James Inman

Date: 11/17/2015 8:48:00 AM

Not a coffee person but nice Acrostic write and flowing alliteration.

Kim Van Breda
Date: 11/17/2015 9:23:00 AM

Thanks James. It was a rainy winter day spent sitting at Starbucks observing people yesterday that prompted this write ~~X~~