Star Vacation

From down here to a place afar
Let's travel to a sparkling star,
Hop on a UFO and dump our car
To romp and rollick on the star.

In the realm of galaxies and black holes
Let's playact some stellar roles,
You be an angel and I the sly devil
And forge another world on an anvil.

We will wander around the milky ways
And explore the by lanes and highways,
And survey the handiwork of God -
Is it a masterpiece or just slipshod?

On our way back home astride
A shooting star or a cruising asteroid,
Let's wash up and dress our best
On the moon to wine, dine and fete!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kovrlija Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Wonderful!
Veetil Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 11:59 PM
this is a masterpiece...great write...
A   Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 5:02 PM
Hi Abdul, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
Mandani Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Thanks Linda.
Arowolo Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Wonderful and nice piece,Abdul...Congrats on your win....
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 12:49 PM
Abdul congrats on your win. Very imaginative. Warm Smiles, Connie
Eastman Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 12:00 PM
Lovely trip... among the stars. Congratulations on the win.
Squyres Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Can just imagine riding on a shooting star through the galaxy !! Congrats on your win !!
Ober Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 9:53 AM
Awesome!! I really loved reading this one. Congratulations.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Hello Abdul, I am looking for your response to Poetry. Let me know when it is done. I look forward to reading.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Sounds like fun!
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 10:40 PM
this is a cute poem. If it is not for fantasy entry, it should be!!
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