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Star Pupil
A teacher took a girl aside to mention That he had noticed her lack of attention And had done nothing at all today in class The pupil replied “oh sir, indeed I have.” “I composed a poem, it’s my best one yet” “I’m sure you will agree, so please do not fret” He knew here was a pupil with ambition A star in making following her vision.
3rd September 2021 Poem inspired from a true story told to me by a former teacher.

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Date: 9/8/2021 6:13:00 PM
Hello Belle ... I reckon I'd be exactly the same. For folk like us we had a different vision than those teaching uninteresting subjects - thank you Belle - Lindsay
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Date: 9/7/2021 7:56:00 AM
Loved this beauty, Belle! A Star in the Making, who had followed her vision. That indeed separated the ordinary from the stand outs, Panagiota
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/7/2021 9:37:00 AM
It certainly did, thank you Panagiota… Belle
Date: 9/5/2021 5:24:00 AM
Enjoyed the essence of your story, Belle. They learn in many ways as you so well illustrated.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/7/2021 9:36:00 AM
So they do, thank you Vijay… Belle
Date: 9/4/2021 8:26:00 AM
what a lovely story
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/4/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Jack, l love the story it’s a gem… Belle
Date: 9/4/2021 4:59:00 AM
A heartwarming story Belle. Enjoy the weekend, it's warming up again. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/4/2021 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Tom, it’s a lovely day, enjoy your weekend too… Belle
Date: 9/4/2021 1:28:00 AM
Thanks for sharing.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/4/2021 2:01:00 AM
Thank you Victor… Belle
Date: 9/3/2021 8:38:00 PM
Hi Belle, What a heartwarming write. Teachers are amazing. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful evening and evening:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/4/2021 2:01:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, have a wonderful weekend… Belle
Date: 9/3/2021 8:32:00 PM
Very nice! Well done. Thanks for sharing :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/4/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thank you Heidi… Belle

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