Charlotte Wong Poet I do not know?

Star People

Child colored blue,
What do you see in those vast eyes of yours?
Pictured a black veil splattered with white,
You with a wandering soul have no place here.
Where is your mind, is it down here?
Alongside the lonesome society screaming in your ear.
Or is it way up high where the energy lies?
With constellations radiating the light that your mind portrays. 
Living with a unique sense of being you lie,
Harbor the night in the center of your heart,
Feeling the sadness that should rip you apart,
But not tonight for you sleep with ghosts,
And you disappear back with the shadows.
Are you still here, little child?
Or are you once again dreaming beyond the clouds and stars my dear?

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Richard Evans September 16, 2017 at 2:25 PM Nice. Feels like an allegory. "living with a unique sense of being you lie" is a great line. Thanks for sharing...........peace! Charlotte Wong September 16, 2017 at 9:47 PM Thank you so much for the comment! I appreciate it a lot. Wishing you a great day!

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 11:12 PM Charlotte, Congratulations on your nice win. ~LINDA~ Charlotte Wong January 2, 2016 at 9:04 PM Thank you so much! c':

Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:27 PM nice win Charlotte Wong January 2, 2016 at 9:04 PM Thank you! c:

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 28, 2015 at 1:05 AM Great take and a wonderful poetry Charlotte.. congrats on big win! Charlotte Wong January 2, 2016 at 9:04 PM Thank you very much !!

Sandra Haight December 27, 2015 at 4:28 PM Hi Charlotte, congratulations on your 2nd Place win for lovely poem with is wonderful take on the theme! Sandra Charlotte Wong January 2, 2016 at 9:03 PM Thank you, this means a lot! I really enjoyed writing it!

Susan Gentry December 27, 2015 at 2:34 PM Congratulations on your win! Charlotte Wong January 2, 2016 at 9:03 PM Thank you very much!!

Mark Woods December 27, 2015 at 1:57 PM A winning first post! Fabulous. Hopefully a sign of many many more great writes. Charlotte Wong January 2, 2016 at 9:02 PM Thank you, this means a lot! I will try my best :D

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:15 PM Hi Charlotte, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Charlotte Wong December 21, 2015 at 7:32 PM Thank you very much! I enjoy this community and site a lot and will continue writing! Many hugs!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 20, 2015 at 12:52 PM An excellent poem Charlotte. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Charlotte Wong December 21, 2015 at 7:33 PM Thank you very much :-)!

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 10:14 AM Charlotte, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Charlotte Wong December 21, 2015 at 7:32 PM Thank you very much! I look forward to following your poetry entries too, this community is very warm :-)! Thank you and many hugs!!