Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Couplet

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Star In My Sky

in illuminated sky glitter sparkling stars, 
                     my precious star dazzles blissfully in my heart. 

                     from the splendid day my special girl came to me, 
                     everything around felt magically soothing. 

                    monotonous life turned supremely glorious, 
                    her graceful spirit transformed my prosaic life . 

                    brought inimitable joy, boundless happiness, 
                    she carried heavenly bliss and endless kindness. 

                     gazing at exceptionally courageous face, 
                     my sorrows, my sufferings, instantly forget. 

                     with a compassionate soul, the angel of light, 
                     unfailingly caring, lively, cheerfully bright. 

                     talent and humility - blended in one soul, 
                     rare to find, healing agony her unique goal.

                     stands comforting and vigilant by the bedside, 
                     of the sick, of the frail, the ailing - day and night. 

                    makes me the proudest, exultant mother on earth, 
                    truly blessed, having unparalleled gem like her.




                                      October 22, 2020
                           For From The Heart Poetry Contest
                                Sponsor: Regina Mcintosh
                      Checked by HMS (12 syllables in each line)                         
                                         

                                            FIRST PLACE
                          A Brian Strand Couplet Poetry Contest

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Kim Merryman July 30, 2021 at 9:53 AM A beautiful tribute to your daughter, Mala! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M Malabika Ray Choudhury July 31, 2021 at 5:28 AM Thank you, Kim. My daughter is really dedicated to her profession - which is Oncology, and I am very proud of her dedication and devotion. I feel amazed to see how much she cares for her patients. Love ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman July 29, 2021 at 9:27 AM This is written with such grace Mala. Your love is tenderly displayed in every word, every line - "unparalleled gem," "blended in one soul," "illuminated sky glitter." It is delicate as starlight and strong as selfless love. Congratulations on your win dear friend! Malabika Ray Choudhury July 31, 2021 at 5:26 AM Thank you, Sam. My daughter is really dedicated to her profession - which is Oncology, and I am really proud of her. I feel amazed to see how dedicated she is to her patients. Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex July 29, 2021 at 4:27 AM The words gush straight from the heart. Treasuring the precious children like beautiful stars... A beautifully created couplet. Congratulations on your win! Malabika Ray Choudhury July 29, 2021 at 4:47 AM Thanks, Christuraj. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Unseeking Seeker July 28, 2021 at 7:45 PM Living the spiritual life … exalted! Congrats on your win, Malabika Malabika Ray Choudhury July 29, 2021 at 4:47 AM Thank you, Dear Poet.

John Watt October 27, 2020 at 10:06 AM This is a lovely expression from the heart, Mala! You must be very proud of this bright star in your sky. As a father of two wonderful grown children, I relate so deeply to these feelings, thank you for putting them so beautifully into words ~ John Malabika Ray Choudhury October 27, 2020 at 3:45 PM Dear Friend, yes, I am proud of this star in my sky, the way you must be of yours. I have tried to describe that sublime feeling, but sometimes words are not enough. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Best wishes, Mala

JC Brul October 25, 2020 at 10:05 PM I have no words for this poem...I was breathless as I read each line...A magnificent piece on motherhood! Malabika Ray Choudhury October 27, 2020 at 3:42 PM Dear JCB, your words inspire me! Yes, motherhood is a sublime experience. Are we really able to describe that feeling in words? I am sure, you feel the same way. Love, Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu October 22, 2020 at 10:38 AM Hello Mala, I felt so peaceful when reading this poem. Love Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu October 23, 2020 at 10:45 AM Hello Mala, Mala You made my day brighter. I am so glad you feel blessed. Love, Darlene. Malabika Ray Choudhury October 22, 2020 at 3:56 PM Thank you, Darlene. I always look forward to reading your inspiring comments. You make me feel blessed. Love, Mala