Star Gazing

In an instant my world went into a blur
All it took was one look from her
Forever immortalized
In the front and back of my mind
Its like falling into river of cocoa and cream
With marshmallow rocks found in a dream
Her twinkles so divine
She's such a lucky find, how could I make her mine?
I feel like a little boy in a toy store
No matter what she gives me, I always want more
The girl next door, she's got beauty and love galore
For her to be with me is what I implore
From how she shuffles her hair to her innocent wink
Stops my heart and affects how I think
Its like being lost and found in the same moment
Had to catch myself, give me a moment
When she's not around I wonder where she went
I think about all the time I spent
Tryna get her to see the hint
Those jumble words I told her wasnt what I meant
Such an attitude of the city, she'll throw you some fits
But humble like a country girl and make you some grits
She makes me feel like Christmas morning
Snowed in and its still pouring
Like the warmth from the fireplace
That hugs and kisses my face
Walks into a room and she brings the light from the Alaskan sky
A cosmic entity feeding my eye
She's a Goddess, she's Aphrodite
Graceful and dainty yet wise and mighty
Lures me in with her Cheshire cat grin
Warps my reality so I think that I'll win
No matter how close I get its not close enough
I try to show confidence but she calls my bluff
My Astro-Goddess, I admire from the Earth
Your constellation in the sky is a price tag of your worth
Its you that I keep praisin' its you Im praisin'
It feels so amazin' when Im star gazin'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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