Star Gazer

Hundreds of pinpoint lights in the sky Just one of the many wonders to be seen by the naked eye Every night I reach up to grab one Of course I can’t ….. But it’s worth a try Their distance from the spot that I stand is astonishing …. My oh my! For now I will just sit here and enjoy the beauty of their patterns Soon the sun will rise and I will have to say bye

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John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2009 11:57:00 AM

I Think human means the one who looks up, James, Sincerely Moses

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/11/2009 3:45:00 AM

the stars are mesmerizing and astonishing,they re little diamonds of light wishing us goodnight--well penned oncemore--charma

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/10/2009 6:19:00 PM

O I do the same! I gaze and want to reach there already dying light, but still wish, if I reach, I'll be wanted tonight, and even though the sun will rise, he's followed by the moonlight eyes! your poems of stars and space are definitely of my interest :D