Rowena Velasco Poet Footle

Star Far - CM

Fourtle Poetry Contest //Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Contest Judged:  9/21/2025 8:25:00 PM
( 2nd Place )

Written: September 15, 2025


Bright star, shine far
Deep scar, leaves mar

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Lise Andresen September 22, 2025 at 5:42 AM - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2025 at 5:35 AM Poignantly painful. Congrats!

Charles Messina September 22, 2025 at 3:53 AM Very nice, Rowena. Congratulations on your winning placement :) Rowena Velasco September 22, 2025 at 4:08 AM Tnx Charles.

Paige Hind September 18, 2025 at 7:09 PM Beautiful. Rowena Velasco September 20, 2025 at 12:23 AM Thank you.

Abdullah Alhemaidy September 18, 2025 at 12:28 PM So cute :-) Rowena Velasco September 20, 2025 at 12:23 AM Tnx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 17, 2025 at 6:05 AM - So true, well written Rowena :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Rowena Velasco September 17, 2025 at 6:11 AM Thanks Anne!

Victor Buhagiar September 15, 2025 at 11:32 PM Deep idea in just two lines. Best for a win. Rowena Velasco September 16, 2025 at 3:17 AM Thank you. I truly hoped to capture depth in simplicity.

Krishika Upadhyay September 15, 2025 at 7:35 PM Simple yet striking , just two lines, but they hold both hope and hurt in perfect balance. Thank you for sharing this with us. Rowena Velasco September 16, 2025 at 3:16 AM Thank you so much I’m glad the balance came through.