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Star Dust In Your Eyes

star shattered shards like broken glass
falling outward as time and mass
floaters in the eye of night
mining poetry infinite
retinal dancers, prancers,
mute slivers without answers
star shattered shards like broken glass
falling outward as time and mass


Debbie Guzzi
Contest: STARDUST IN AN OCTELLE 
Date: 7/5/13

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Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 10:20:00 PM

:-) I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2013 4:31:00 PM

a wonderful entry in her contest, Debs. Congrats to you and thanks so much for my win with free verse. Always amazes me when I can do a free verse. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2013 4:41:00 PM

Congratssssss..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/16/2013 3:29:00 PM

I'm loving these references......the floaters in the eye of the night......so brilliant!......

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2013 3:42:00 AM

you took this to a semi-surrealistic flight, really enjoyed the ' retinal dancers', debbie.. congrats and hope you find time to check my blog!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2013 9:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/15/2013 7:05:00 PM

hi Debbie congrats great poem Shadow x smiles

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/14/2013 8:11:00 AM

This is why i always love to visit your poems.There's always some verses which are creatively penned.Im going to look into that article re faries..Did you say celtic?I went to Wales this May..and last year..Maybe the next time i go i 'd be third time lucky and meet the enchanting creature beneath a mushroom who knows..Happy Sunday ma xxz

Kash Poet

Date: 7/11/2013 12:38:00 PM

Excellently done!!Enjoyed reading it.

John Posey

Date: 7/9/2013 10:07:00 AM

Terrific read!!!! ....Contest or no. .... Jake

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 7/8/2013 8:09:00 PM

Excellent sketch in most powerful and lucid words in describing the glass braking game of stars which falls as dust. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your kind comments on my Yoga series Poem -Meditation. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..D Guzzi