Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

Star Dust In Your Eyes

star shattered shards like broken glass
falling outward as time and mass
floaters in the eye of night
mining poetry infinite
retinal dancers, prancers,
mute slivers without answers
star shattered shards like broken glass
falling outward as time and mass


Debbie Guzzi
Contest: STARDUST IN AN OCTELLE 
Date: 7/5/13

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Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:20 PM :-) I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2013 at 4:31 PM a wonderful entry in her contest, Debs. Congrats to you and thanks so much for my win with free verse. Always amazes me when I can do a free verse. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2013 at 4:41 PM Congratssssss..Sara

Carrie Richards July 16, 2013 at 3:29 PM I'm loving these references......the floaters in the eye of the night......so brilliant!......

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2013 at 3:42 AM you took this to a semi-surrealistic flight, really enjoyed the ' retinal dancers', debbie.. congrats and hope you find time to check my blog!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2013 at 9:11 PM Congratulations on your win.

Shadow Hamilton July 15, 2013 at 7:05 PM hi Debbie congrats great poem Shadow x smiles

Charmaine Chircop July 14, 2013 at 8:11 AM This is why i always love to visit your poems.There's always some verses which are creatively penned.Im going to look into that article re faries..Did you say celtic?I went to Wales this May..and last year..Maybe the next time i go i 'd be third time lucky and meet the enchanting creature beneath a mushroom who knows..Happy Sunday ma xxz

Kash Poet July 11, 2013 at 12:38 PM Excellently done!!Enjoyed reading it.

John Posey July 9, 2013 at 10:07 AM Terrific read!!!! ....Contest or no. .... Jake

Ravindra K Kapoor July 8, 2013 at 8:09 PM Excellent sketch in most powerful and lucid words in describing the glass braking game of stars which falls as dust. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your kind comments on my Yoga series Poem -Meditation. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..D Guzzi

Tim Ryerson July 7, 2013 at 6:53 PM Check out the alliteration and internal rhyme too y'all!...Oh yeah!...Hands down winner, no one else need apply...

Mustapha Mohammed July 7, 2013 at 7:13 AM I don't be on here much but I do look forward to reading your well crafted poems.Excellent!

Sara Kendrick July 7, 2013 at 6:19 AM Very descriptive work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Abdulhafeez Oyewole July 7, 2013 at 5:08 AM What a brilliant and thought provoking piece! Best wishes Deb. AO

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 6, 2013 at 6:20 PM Deb, it is profound as well as attractive as only you can do it!! Jag

Jack Horne July 5, 2013 at 4:33 PM awesome write, Debs. Congrats on your wins : ) Thanks for posting your very useful blogs - especially enjoyed the one on writing in rhyming verse