Star Dancing

Chicagoland dance! Star dreaming as a child Feet flittered elsewhere. A. Green

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/29/2010 7:05:00 AM

I may be wrong and it will not be the first time! But i got two things from this. One, you like to dance and dreamed of being a dancer and two, you wound up doing something else with your life, found a different career. Or maybe three lived in that area and moved away? I love the Japanese forms and how so much can be said with so little. Excellent work!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/20/2010 4:30:00 PM

well I did submitt the Longfellow grumble...and it was just before they started playing sorry Amy...and it's a good one too!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/20/2010 1:51:00 PM

Amy did you get my contest entry before the site statrted going coocoo? Henry Wordsworth Longfellow? (interesting write...sorry to use this soup mail not working)

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 9:07:00 AM

Nice enthusiastic write

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/18/2010 2:31:00 PM

Great Senryu, Amy. Well composed. Good luck on the contest and thank you for your comments on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/18/2010 12:38:00 PM

Very Nice Picture you put in my head... And thank you so much for your wonderful comments... always inspires me to write more!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/18/2010 12:11:00 AM

Good luck in the contest.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/17/2010 11:39:00 PM

I enjoyed reading you dear Amy..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2010 11:16:00 PM

Had similar dreams, Amy, and my "feet flittered elsewhere" as well. It's still nice to think back about how much that dream meant as a child though. Enjoyed your senryu! Love, Carolyn