Star Dancing

Chicagoland dance!
   Star dreaming as a child
      Feet flittered elsewhere.

A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Tapley Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 7:05 AM
I may be wrong and it will not be the first time! But i got two things from this. One, you like to dance and dreamed of being a dancer and two, you wound up doing something else with your life, found a different career. Or maybe three lived in that area and moved away? I love the Japanese forms and how so much can be said with so little. Excellent work!
Guzzi Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 4:30 PM
well I did submitt the Longfellow grumble...and it was just before they started playing sorry Amy...and it's a good one too!
Guzzi Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Amy did you get my contest entry before the site statrted going coocoo? Henry Wordsworth Longfellow? (interesting write...sorry to use this soup mail not working)
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 9:07 AM
Nice enthusiastic write
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April 18, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Great Senryu, Amy. Well composed. Good luck on the contest and thank you for your comments on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:38 PM
Very Nice Picture you put in my head... And thank you so much for your wonderful comments... always inspires me to write more!!
Mehta Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 12:11 AM
Good luck in the contest.
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April 17, 2010 at 11:39 PM
I enjoyed reading you dear Amy..Charma
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April 17, 2010 at 11:16 PM
Had similar dreams, Amy, and my "feet flittered elsewhere" as well. It's still nice to think back about how much that dream meant as a child though. Enjoyed your senryu! Love, Carolyn
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