Maurice Yvonne Poet Verse

Star Crossed Lovers

darkness yells out the daylight
charcoal pencil images
join to dance within the void
shadows kissing in thin air
on this black magic evening
suddenly they disappear
star crossed - like silhouettes lit

08~11~2014

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Paul Callus November 13, 2014 at 5:09 PM Mmmmm ....Images within imagery! Your search for uniqueness is well rewarded; beautiful! // paul

Eve Roper November 9, 2014 at 8:24 AM love your write Nette,good luck on the contest :) hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2014 at 12:29 AM Gosh, you just hop from one contest to another. You are becoming such an amazing SOUPER!! I have not seen many in this category but of the ones I saw, yours is a standout!! I love it!

John Lawless November 8, 2014 at 4:14 PM Brilliant picture of a lonely walk after the end of a relationship

M. L. Kiser November 8, 2014 at 2:32 PM I can see this; well done, Maurice. Good luck with the contest.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 8, 2014 at 12:12 PM Wonderful imagery n a perfectly penned Write Maurice! Gl in contest!

Jan Allison November 8, 2014 at 11:28 AM amazing imagery Maurice:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode November 8, 2014 at 9:14 AM Your mastery of word is nonpareil,no doubt you are gifted and I am happy to have come in contact with you. "charcoal pencil Images",that hits the target,goodluck in the contest Maurice.