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Many years ago when I was just a teen at college, I fell for a girl called Alison. She was pretty with curly hair, braces and blue eyes. I was awkward shy (I probably still am) but she seemed to like me. I walked her home one time and she invited me in for a glass of squash before I cycled back to my parents. Something I always wonder, when it went wonky after that peak of hopefulness, was it me projecting or was there really a potential friendship or more.. the heartache was palpable, but so was the briefest joy. Some other force intervened I seem to recall. A misunderstanding. I never got the chance to explain. Somewhere deep inside this poem is that story and a face I will never quite forget. A not Juliet.

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A Jinjagoliath poem:
29th August 2023
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*Placed 5th*
Contest: Star-Crossed Lovers Poetry
Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori
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We talked Then walked The stars aligned Too briefly Now two fates Resigned We hoped We dreamed But not to be The ache Frustrates Reality A senseless joy When girl Meets boy To lose Un-promised Hopeful joy Life is cruel Life is kind No guarantee Of hearts Designed To meet The purpose Only time Will tell It's secret To this Living spell The universe Is not to blame We are not pawns In some Heavenly Game The stars Burn brightly For the few So brief, and yet Such beauty, true. Healing waits And nothing's Wasted Just grateful Briefest love Was tasted

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Date: 3/20/2024 1:56:00 PM
Such a sweet, tender read dear Chris with the reminiscence of what might have been. Your introduction makes it even more poignant. So beautifully written with heartfelt sentiments and those last two stanza ‘s in particular are profound. This will resonate with many. A wonderful write my friend. X :)
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 3/20/2024 9:23:00 PM
Thank you dear Christina :) This seems like eons away and yet the memory is still strong *sigh* Cx
Date: 9/13/2023 1:39:00 AM
Beautifully written, loved how it rhymes nicely.
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Date: 9/13/2023 8:04:00 AM
Thank you. These are best spoken aloud I feel :)
Date: 9/3/2023 4:25:00 PM
That is sad yet beautiful too, sorry things went wrong back then. Life is what it is, what will be will be. All the best Christopher… Belle
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:39:00 PM
Sometimes the ghosts of the past come back to haunt us.. as poets we need those echoes. Thank you Belle x
Date: 9/1/2023 3:45:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 9/1/2023 4:08:00 AM
Jeanette lovely to hear from you and grateful thanks for this encouragement x
Date: 9/1/2023 2:47:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Christopher - Luck in the contest :) -
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Date: 9/1/2023 4:05:00 AM
You are very kind Anne-Lise. The concept of star-crossed lovers is a fascinating one (Shakespeare got there first ofcourse). Thank you x

Book: Shattered Sighs