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Dear star up in the sky May i have one wish to buy I'll give it all don't make me cry Please oh please I want to try Try to wish away these lies The hurt the pain I'll sacrifice What ever it takes I'll pay the price To know the truth would be so nice Please don't leave me out to dry I'll beg I'll plead just hear me why Why's my heart left to die Really please look in my eye Do not be shy Star I need to know why Why my heart was left to die On that cold dark night he said good bye. Kalee Lynn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/15/2013 12:33:00 PM
Your words are very raw and emotional; I feel what you feel in this piece. Kudos :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:19:00 PM
wow...love this letter to the stars. a very deep and gloomy ending. ..luv...linda
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