Star

you're like a star brightening my life 
shooting across my darkened sky 
fixing my broken mind,you're so beautiful you bring tears to my eyes 
you've opened my heart, helped me see 
that there is so much more to life then i thought they could ever be 
you make me smile like I've never smiled before 
my whole world comes to life 
when i see your face when i hear your voice 
i just wanna hold you near 
i wanna hold you for the rest of my years 
i wanna wake up in the morning 
and the first thing i wanna see is you lieing next to me 
you are the star that has brightened my life 
you are the star that has lightened my sky
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Agustin Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 1:49 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Meadows Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 9:22 AM
This a a lovely poem.
A  Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:04 PM
BECKY, Excellent written poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 3:55 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Becky. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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