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Standing Ovation

Bright sun and cool breeze
Through green branches of tall trees
Along the park's trail

Reveal whitest clouds
And birds in flight and song as
We walked hand in hand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/16/2009 1:47:00 PM
Great double Haiku. Sara
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Date: 7/16/2009 1:42:00 PM
this is cute. check out some of my poems
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