Standing Ovation

Bright sun and cool breeze
Through green branches of tall trees
Along the park's trail

Reveal whitest clouds
And birds in flight and song as
We walked hand in hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Great double Haiku. Sara
Meadows Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 1:42 PM
this is cute. check out some of my poems
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