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Standing At Love's Door

Precious is the heart whom sheds a tear, to catch Its light upon bended knee; gently in these hands A priceless jewel; a sparkling diamond to behold.... Rejoicing anew while pirouetting about; tomorrows Stage aneath a fingertips touch; warmth this breath With dreamful wings; and she shall soar; amid vibrant Colours of a promise; beyound eternals, forevermore ********************************************** ...."Standing, 'At Love's Door'" ~

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:08:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/9/2013 9:37:00 PM

Well well John My friend very sweet romantic piece and how are thee I miss reading your wonderful words! Love your friend Laura :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/20/2012 5:00:00 PM

The title caught my eye,,,, the poem caught my heart,,,,, you have a blessed day John ;}

Cindy Cayton

Date: 6/13/2012 12:17:00 PM

I bid you farewell dear heart, as God has called my attentions elsewhere in life than this site. I hope you are feeling good. God bless, All my loving for you brother, Just Cindy

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/31/2012 2:46:00 PM

Couldn't resist the title and happen to love the poem. It's that eternal pull that keeps up humanyou manage to describe so provocatively! :) Luv, Lizzie