Stand and Weep?

I bid you farewell 
No more my story to you can I tell
I shall not see you again
We shared so much and then
You are gone 
and I am done
for, that is how it shall be
gone the closeness, no more the intimacy

Lost to me now the warmth of your touch, 
One last word I crave so much
No more the delight of you in my sight 
No longer can I remember your voice, it does not feel right
Your voice, the sound that brought such joy
I strain to hear so hard I try
But you are gone 
And I am done
For, that is how it shall be
You will become just a memory

Each moment of my day your company I sought
Your fullness once occupied my every thought
I weep now and cannot console,
A darkness smothers my once vibrant soul
No comfort can I take, but wait  
not so quick to dismiss our fate 
For I shall follow where you have gone
When I am done
For that is how it will be 
A life spent in eternity

Patrick Brennan 2009 ©
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 5:50 AM
sad verse yet they live on with their love withinn you! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Sad write...Very emotive...Keep the creative pen flowing...Writing about it helps to heal...Sara
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June 11, 2010 at 1:08 PM
This is an excellent poem. It's very expressive and the theme stands out. I also like the flow of the rhyming pattern and how it moves the poem along. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
Keys Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 12:51 PM
a moving write, soft and caring. thanks, chuck
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June 11, 2010 at 11:55 AM
lovely write Patrick... good flow of rhyme, loved the second stanza,..enjoyed... P.D.
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