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Stained Glass Rainbow

At high noon mass
	thru colored glass
		a playful sunray dances
	for blessed sunday glances
reflected stained mosaic
hardly looks archaic
	when the rainbow’s set afire
		by heavenly orchestrated choir
	the congregation rejoices
moved by angelic voices



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on December 9, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 3:49 AM
Congrats on your great win!;)
Gauthier Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Brenda.
Wolf Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Your beautiful verse has me vibrating,...sends me soaring, up, up, up there with the angels. Congrats, Line! Cheers, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 11:33 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Gaul Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 7:17 PM
Line, wonderful shape draped in clever rhyme. Truly a reverent visit to mass. Congratulations for your placement.
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 11:34 PM
Thanks, Greg. Most appreciated.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 6:37 PM
Hello Lin Gauthier, my husbamd ise to make different stain glass items. I have two of his stain glass items. I will never part with them. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 5:27 PM
So do i Lin. I have a few pieces hanging on my mirror. Have a nice evening my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Stained glass is magical indeed, Darlene. Love it.
Adams Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:32 AM
i love this one...the stained glass windows in the churches have always caught my eyes...beautiful Line :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Romios Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:53 AM
A Fave, PR
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Theraven Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Line, I can hear the angelic voices raised in song in this write. And I can see the colors of the suns rays on the stained glass. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. Most appreciated.
Green Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 8:25 AM
I could see the colors glowing in this wonderful poem Line.
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. Much appreciated.
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 5:53 AM
Beautifully expressed poem puts me right there in that heavenly church, Line! Enjoyed this one! :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Laura.
Mcguire Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:49 PM
VERY NICE! made me feel good about the church for a moment, thank you. :) a Fav for me
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 12:25 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy. What a lovely compliment.
There Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:39 PM
LOVE this, Line ~ What beautiful imagery in this perfectly rhymed piece! A fave <3
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 12:24 AM
Hello There, thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
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