Stained

The envelope was white
before he spilled the wine
on letter, wrote in spite
on what was yours, or mine.
And now a purple stain
does shadow words within
then seeps, does slowly reign
and mar the notes' meaning.
Violet, left behind;
the testament of grape
upon a letter signed
so they could both escape.
So it remains, unsealed,
complete, unsent, yet stained;
a wound to not be healed
or love that never waned?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 10:25 PM
And I really like yours
Miller Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Thank you Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 10:11 PM
Such an interesting take on the contest. Just wait till I post mine. It's off the wall.
Godwin Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 1:35 PM
Dramatic, clever take on theme, really enjoyed. You worked all the words in naturally. Very well done. Do you want 'do shadow' or 'does shadow?' Enjoyed reading your entry, Terry, always do.
Miller Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 3:08 PM
Oh interesting constructive comment as always, and I appreciate it; I do think does, will amend thank you
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 4:38 PM
flowing rhyme scheme that tells a story....I love the mystery and intrique surrounding the envelope. Last four lines were perfect.
Miller Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Thank you so much Sara I always appreciate your comments
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