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Stain Glass Masquerade

Stain glass masquerade each face a different mask lost in reflection

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Raul Moreno

Date: 9/9/2011 9:41:00 AM

A beauitiful senryu you have penned Lori, deeply enjoyed...Raul

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/19/2011 8:38:00 PM

Lori-This is an appealing title. I love the entire history behind stained glass windows and how they were used to educate illiterate peasants. This is an thot provoking angle you have penned here. It caused me to pause and think a while. Yes, I believe I get your point..For me.the beauty of EACH stained glass window is its individuality and message of hope. Glad you enjoyed my tyburn. VEry hard to write. I encourage u to try if u have not written one yet. Very tricky. Gwendolen

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/12/2011 4:38:00 PM

I like this haiku but feel you should get rid of the "the" in the last line. The first line is great! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 8/12/2011 9:28:00 PM

Thank you for critiquing my poem. I value any input anyone can give me! I love to write poetry and short stories. I have been writing since I was just a kid. I thank you again for your comments.---Lori

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 3:06:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read your very interesting writing today Lori. Thank you for posting your poetry for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2011 7:53:00 AM

Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/10/2011 9:05:00 PM

Lovely haiku with nice lovely images, Lori