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Stain Glass Masquerade

Stain glass masquerade 
                                    each face a different mask
                                         lost in reflection

confusionintrospectionsenryu

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Raul Moreno

September 9, 2011 at 9:41 AM

A beauitiful senryu you have penned Lori, deeply enjoyed...Raul

Gwendolen Song

August 19, 2011 at 8:38 PM

Lori-This is an appealing title. I love the entire history behind stained glass windows and how they were used to educate illiterate peasants. This is an thot provoking angle you have penned here. It caused me to pause and think a while. Yes, I believe I get your point..For me.the beauty of EACH stained glass window is its individuality and message of hope. Glad you enjoyed my tyburn. VEry hard to write. I encourage u to try if u have not written one yet. Very tricky. Gwendolen

Matthew Anish

August 12, 2011 at 4:38 PM

I like this haiku but feel you should get rid of the "the" in the last line. The first line is great! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Lori Lucas Mcclure

August 12, 2011 at 9:28 PM

Thank you for critiquing my poem. I value any input anyone can give me! I love to write poetry and short stories. I have been writing since I was just a kid. I thank you again for your comments.---Lori

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 11, 2011 at 3:06 PM

It was a pleasure to read your very interesting writing today Lori. Thank you for posting your poetry for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol