Stabbed

This pain is heavy…It burns like fire My soul breathes in deeply and screams for your laughter My wounds are deep, they control me And tell me I’m dying Eternal is my love, while yours could never last forever You know I’ve tried to quit it but the silence broke me down The promise has been shattered so tears stream down my face Kiss me my darling…before it’s too late I’ll give you my heart…Just keep it with you for all eternity

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Danny Stinson

Date: 11/25/2011 8:42:00 PM

I've read your poems each multiple times, and each one stabs me right in the gut: each word in them is so visceral and full of power that I'm left speechless. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

Jennie Duck
Date: 11/26/2011 2:00:00 PM

That's exactly what I've been aiming for! Takes me forever to write a poem though. I can only write when my mind lets me...Not when I want too. But finally someone who feels about my poetry the way I do(: I can't thank you enough for commented your true feelings <3

Jennie Duck

Date: 11/25/2011 4:11:00 PM

Thank you soo very much! :D If only I could make money off of my poetry! :\