Squeaky Wheel

The wheel that squeaks the loudest ~~ Really gets on our nerves! written December 15, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/16/2021 6:21:00 AM

I often see the other children bowing to the LOUDEST ONES even though they are totally in the wrong; to try and get some quiet.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/16/2021 9:12:00 AM

Yep, even little kids like peace and quiet!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/16/2021 5:38:00 AM

yes indeed, or the squeak of chalk on a blackboard...Delice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/16/2021 9:13:00 AM

Oh, please spare me. That sound sends chills up my spine!

Deb M

Date: 12/15/2021 9:45:00 PM

Ha Milton …..short sweet funny and straight to the point! Loved it. Debx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/16/2021 9:13:00 AM

Thanks, Deb. It is true, isn't it?

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/15/2021 2:52:00 PM

very true..great Epigram, Milton!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/15/2021 3:49:00 PM

Thanks so much, Mala. And when you get to be my age, your nerves are easily on edge!

Jenna Logan

Date: 12/15/2021 2:24:00 PM

ha the wheels on the bus go round and round until they fall off

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/15/2021 2:31:00 PM

LOL. Seems I recall that from my girl scout days!