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Spurs Are Loose

the twang of her country boots slipping, sliding on peanut shells spurs are loose, on the run her tongue like a silver bell Jimmy fringed suede swaying side to side this cowgirl raves with a wink and a down-home grin simplicity cascades from her resplendent crown her slender fingers strum her cordial gee-tar yee-haw, the crowd lauds loud and proud of the star she twinkles and soars high-fiving the lights of the ebony sky 11/14/2019

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Date: 11/24/2019 9:01:00 AM
This is a fun poem. Great descriptions.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2019 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, Juliet! Yee-haw!
Date: 11/16/2019 11:50:00 AM
Interesting poem...As a Brit I guess I don't fully understand haha..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2019 9:38:00 PM
Thanks, Silent! :):)
Date: 11/15/2019 2:00:00 PM
Her cowboy ways are making me visualize so many moments in my family complete with boots, fringe, and cowboy hats! Than you for writing this one, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thank YOU!
Date: 11/15/2019 9:58:00 AM
Sounds like a free Spirit roaming the West with Spurs...and an Angel Voice...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2019 10:06:00 AM
:) Arturo
Date: 11/15/2019 9:28:00 AM
I could see this my friend because I have seen this after visiting many dance halls down here in Texas. Loved this kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2019 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Chris :)
Date: 11/15/2019 7:47:00 AM
Great description. I never was a cowgirl, but I had a costume when I was ten that I wore a lot. I had spurs, too. You reminded me of those long ago days. Guitar came in my 30's. And love horses. This is a fun piem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 11/15/2019 7:42:00 AM
amazing how this created a picture in my mind of the concert -- excellent job.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2019 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Jon!

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