'spurned Date'

Guess what...I got her number,
I exclaimed in my slumber!
I woke up all excited,
believing love would make us united!

So I asked her out for a date,
knowing her reply would seal my fate!
She spurned my only request,
I gave up my dream conquest!

Wish she would understand me better,
I scribbled in my moist letter!
It's not always about sex,
Why is love so damn complex!

Now I sit all alone,
right beside my cell phone!
Thinking whether I should text,
and renew my impossible conquest!

Dedicated with love to: You Know Who
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hall Mad Poet Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 4:55 PM
Welcome to the soup. Cool Poem
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July 26, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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July 26, 2010 at 5:04 AM
Good luck in pursuit of this young lady..Sometime they say we women say the men pursues us until we catch him. Also a possibility is there could be someone who is the perfect match for you but you are too engrossed in the wrong person...Enjoyed the reading of your work..Sara
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