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'spurned Date'

Guess what...I got her number, I exclaimed in my slumber! I woke up all excited, believing love would make us united! So I asked her out for a date, knowing her reply would seal my fate! She spurned my only request, I gave up my dream conquest! Wish she would understand me better, I scribbled in my moist letter! It's not always about sex, Why is love so damn complex! Now I sit all alone, right beside my cell phone! Thinking whether I should text, and renew my impossible conquest! Dedicated with love to: You Know Who

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2010 4:55:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. Cool Poem
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:16:00 AM
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Date: 7/26/2010 5:04:00 AM
Good luck in pursuit of this young lady..Sometime they say we women say the men pursues us until we catch him. Also a possibility is there could be someone who is the perfect match for you but you are too engrossed in the wrong person...Enjoyed the reading of your work..Sara
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