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Spun Out

ive seen all the colours in my mirror until they turned to black and white never sure what to make of it but i always knew it wasnt right ive seen all the twisted wire that entwined itself around it was absurd to witness as it crept without a sound ive seen without a second thought the people start to shift the way they move to fit like losing such a precious gift ive seen the one who didnt go who stood up through the crowd this outsider was ignored i guess he wasn't very loud ive seen a change that never happened and resolutions go undone i wonder how this spool would spin if it never had been spun

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Date: 2/27/2010 3:13:00 AM
I'm trying to vision what your words are saying. I've got to say it's got me to wondering to. Thank you for sharing
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:06:00 AM
Very interesting writing today H. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2010 12:53:00 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks
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