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This is a Lune haiku. ~

look child
neath moon's blessed face
garden sprites

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2024 5:24:00 PM

Wow. I can just picture this. Such vivid imagery of the child beneath the moon. Spritely, spiritedly, and spiritually! ~ Gershon

Regina Elliott
Date: 7/9/2024 2:51:00 AM

You're so kind, Gershon. May Hashem's blessings continually come your way. :)