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This is a Lune haiku. ~

sprites

look child
neath moon's blessed face
garden sprites
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Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Wow. I can just picture this. Such vivid imagery of the child beneath the moon. Spritely, spiritedly, and spiritually! ~ Gershon
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July 9, 2024 at 2:51 AM
You're so kind, Gershon. May Hashem's blessings continually come your way. :)
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