Springtime

Thick, grey clouds
subside -
The sun is free,
the sky can breathe
at last.

*Form: Gogyoka
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Hunter Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Here's another I hadn't seen before. I agree with what you said about Dead buffaloes roaming(I was turkey hunting on the plateau in Nebraska when I wrote it)...our worlds are very different, and I love reading about yours. The sky you describe, in so few words, is almost alien to me. Love it!
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November 10, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Heather, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 1:57 AM
Congratulations on yet another well deserved win heather xx
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Heather. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 5:20 PM
Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 4:10 PM
oops, I was thinking you were someone else when I wrote my comment below. But I now know you too!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 4:09 PM
and how did I ever miss this one??
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 4:09 PM
hey, in a way, yours was like mine!! way to go, girlfriend. BIG congrats.
Zerbst Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Wouldn't it be nice if it did that here too; Kindest regards for your pretty review. Nice poem.
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October 28, 2012 at 5:18 AM
Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry
Poet Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 11:17 PM
Just wonderful!!!This will do good in the contest.Thanks for visiting and commenting at my poem.
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October 27, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Beautiful piece my dear poet friend... very enjoyed... Michael
Ellison Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 6:20 PM
Thank you for your cheery optimistic poem about spring... good luck in Joann's contest! Hugs, Jack
Scott Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 3:37 PM
LOVLEY WRITE MATE IVE WROTE ABOUT THESE SEAWSONS MYSELF WELCOMNE TO SOUP XX DAVIDSCOTT
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 6:54 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Heather. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
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October 25, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Lovely poem Heather, enjoyed, love elizabeth
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