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Springtime

Springtime, known as such a beautiful season of the year, inspiring this poetic rhyme, as our searching souls come together longing to be held with dreams that meld, you and I in love -forever- in love, you and I; with dreams that meld, longing to be held as our searching souls come together inspiring this poetic rhyme; such a beautiful season of the year known as Springtime. May 7, 2020

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Date: 6/3/2020 7:44:00 AM
Very creatively woven. An inspiring piece indeed!
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/3/2020 7:56:00 AM
Thank you, JCB, I enjoy doing something different once in a while. John
Date: 6/2/2020 8:15:00 PM
Very cool as I've not seen this form and am learning through all of you friends here. Thankyou for enlightening me with your talents.
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2020 9:59:00 PM
Thanks, Sheri, I appreciate it. Sometimes it’s fun to try something totally different. Hugs, John
Date: 5/28/2020 7:40:00 PM
John, great job on this mirror poem describing both spring and love. Very inspiring! Congratulations on your win in the spring contest ~ John
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/28/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 5/12/2020 12:56:00 AM
So well done, John - a beautiful descriptioon of love and spring. Congratulations on your win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/12/2020 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sam, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 5/11/2020 7:57:00 PM
oh yes, one of those backward forward poems!! I remember contests where we did a few of those. VERY well done and Congrats on a great win I see.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/12/2020 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/11/2020 10:10:00 AM
Superb write, your poetry is mesmerizing - congratulations on your top win. Blessings Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/11/2020 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jenn. Do I really mesmerize you with my words? I never looked at my writing that way. Hugs, John
Date: 5/9/2020 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations John! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, well done my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/10/2020 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, Emile, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest.
Date: 5/8/2020 7:58:00 PM
I liked the way that the verses were reversed and flowed beautifully without losing anything in doing so, in fact, enhancing the romance and feeling of Springtime ...
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/8/2020 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, Shirley, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 5/7/2020 10:31:00 PM
Oh my!! This is so beautiful and romantic. Not only do hearts melt into one, but your words collide and connect in the same amazing way. I shall place this in my favorites. Springtime is a wonderful time of year. Yes, love is in the air. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/8/2020 12:17:00 AM
Thank you for your support and these kind words, Brandy, I appreciate you. Spring and love go hand in hand. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. Hugs, John
Date: 5/7/2020 2:17:00 PM
Masterful, John. Wow. Blessings, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. I had written a reversible poem like this a couple years ago for a contest and thought I would try it once again for something different than I normally write. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Stay safe. John
Date: 5/7/2020 1:44:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, i enjoyed this poem about Spring. Enjoy your day my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2020 1:49:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem, stay safe. John

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