John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

Springtime

Springtime,
                                                  known as   
             such a beautiful season of the year,
                         inspiring this poetic rhyme,
          as our searching souls come together 
                                      longing to be held
                               with dreams that meld,
                                                  you and I
                                                      in love

                                   -forever-    

                      in love,    
                      you and I;
                      with dreams that meld,
                      longing to be held
                      as our searching souls come together
                      inspiring this poetic rhyme;
                      such a beautiful season of the year
                      known as 
                      Springtime.


May 7, 2020

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JC Brul June 3, 2020 at 7:44 AM Very creatively woven. An inspiring piece indeed! John Gondolf June 3, 2020 at 7:56 AM Thank you, JCB, I enjoy doing something different once in a while. John

Sheri Evans June 2, 2020 at 8:15 PM Very cool as I've not seen this form and am learning through all of you friends here. Thankyou for enlightening me with your talents. John Gondolf June 2, 2020 at 9:59 PM Thanks, Sheri, I appreciate it. Sometimes it’s fun to try something totally different. Hugs, John

John Watt May 28, 2020 at 7:40 PM John, great job on this mirror poem describing both spring and love. Very inspiring! Congratulations on your win in the spring contest ~ John John Gondolf May 28, 2020 at 7:54 PM Thanks, John, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Sam Kauffman May 12, 2020 at 12:56 AM So well done, John - a beautiful descriptioon of love and spring. Congratulations on your win! John Gondolf May 12, 2020 at 10:31 PM Thank you, Sam, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2020 at 7:57 PM oh yes, one of those backward forward poems!! I remember contests where we did a few of those. VERY well done and Congrats on a great win I see. John Gondolf May 12, 2020 at 8:38 AM Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate it.

Jennifer Proxenos May 11, 2020 at 10:10 AM Superb write, your poetry is mesmerizing - congratulations on your top win. Blessings Jennifer. John Gondolf May 11, 2020 at 4:37 PM Thank you, Jenn. Do I really mesmerize you with my words? I never looked at my writing that way. Hugs, John

Emile Pinet May 9, 2020 at 10:38 AM Congratulations John! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, well done my friend. John Gondolf May 10, 2020 at 11:36 AM Thanks, Emile, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest.

Shirley Hawkins May 8, 2020 at 7:58 PM I liked the way that the verses were reversed and flowed beautifully without losing anything in doing so, in fact, enhancing the romance and feeling of Springtime ... John Gondolf May 8, 2020 at 8:42 PM Thank you, Shirley, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Brandy Nicole May 7, 2020 at 10:31 PM Oh my!! This is so beautiful and romantic. Not only do hearts melt into one, but your words collide and connect in the same amazing way. I shall place this in my favorites. Springtime is a wonderful time of year. Yes, love is in the air. :) Brandy John Gondolf May 8, 2020 at 12:17 AM Thank you for your support and these kind words, Brandy, I appreciate you. Spring and love go hand in hand. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. Hugs, John

Gershon Wolf May 7, 2020 at 2:17 PM Masterful, John. Wow. Blessings, Gershon John Gondolf May 7, 2020 at 2:25 PM Thanks, Gershon. I had written a reversible poem like this a couple years ago for a contest and thought I would try it once again for something different than I normally write. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Stay safe. John

Darlene De Beaulieu May 7, 2020 at 1:44 PM Hello John Gondolf, i enjoyed this poem about Spring. Enjoy your day my friend. John Gondolf May 7, 2020 at 1:49 PM Hi Darlene, I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem, stay safe. John