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Springs Warmth

Echoes in my essence rode a cold frigid breeze Snowflakes would ride along bringing a deeper freeze Words upon winter's breath seen each time i spoke White warm puffs dance whimsical floating smoke Toes and fingertips tingled a cold that almost burns Beauty in this winter land Yet spring's warmth i yearn

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John Fleming

Date: 12/8/2019 8:58:00 AM

What I like about this brief but enchanting poem is the way it so ably conveys the very essence of what we can all find very appealing and magical in a frozen landscape which is that of Winter; I Like the opposing sensations offered by the descriptions of the cold contrasting against the thin rising wisps of cheery fireside smoke...most comforting. Lovely poetry! P.s love the way you end it...very wistful.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/8/2019 4:44:00 PM

John thank you so much!;) hugs!;$

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/30/2019 2:10:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and very soothing to read! Unfortunately we don’t have snow like that out here. But I’m sure you’re ready for Spring based on this write. Lol

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 3:35:00 PM

Lol well if you was here I'm sure you would wish for spring too! Thank you G!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2019 10:13:00 AM

I’m ready for spring but I do appreciate a sunny day just after a fresh snow fall. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 1:27:00 PM

Ah that is quite beautiful but the cold wind out and spring is looking better and better!;)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/29/2019 1:15:00 PM

I loved the lines ' white warm puffs dance whimsical floating smoke' as we breathe - love imagery and very well crafted - well penned Brenda - splendid poem- Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/30/2019 1:26:00 PM

Jennifer thank you so much! I appreciate your visit!;)