Spring's Symphony

Spring is a symphony played on petals,
the earth hums, and my heart dances in tune.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Lovely, Aaliyah ~
O'Neil Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 2:26 AM
- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Aaliyah :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs
O'Neil Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Thank you so much for your warm and thoughtful message. I'm really touched by your kind words and support. Sending hugs back your way.
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 9:58 PM
How spring like this is. Great metaphor
O'Neil Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:13 AM
Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your thoughtful feedback—it means a lot.
Mckeithan Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Congrats on your placement in this contest Aaliyah with this wonderful monoku on spring
O'Neil Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind words and support. I'm honoured to have placed in the contest, and I'm glad the monoku resonated with you.
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful!!! Yes, it does!!! Your heart and Spring!!
O'Neil Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so much. I’m really glad my poem captured that connection between heart and Spring. It means a lot to hear it resonated with you.
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