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Spring's Symphony

Spring is a symphony played on petals, the earth hums, and my heart dances in tune.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 10:13:00 AM

Lovely, Aaliyah ~

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:14:00 AM

Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2025 2:26:00 AM

- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Aaliyah :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for your warm and thoughtful message. I'm really touched by your kind words and support. Sending hugs back your way.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 9:58:00 PM

How spring like this is. Great metaphor

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:13:00 AM

Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your thoughtful feedback—it means a lot.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/25/2025 9:05:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in this contest Aaliyah with this wonderful monoku on spring

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:12:00 AM

Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind words and support. I'm honoured to have placed in the contest, and I'm glad the monoku resonated with you.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/18/2025 8:52:00 PM

Beautiful!!! Yes, it does!!! Your heart and Spring!!

Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/19/2025 1:51:00 PM

Thank you so much. I’m really glad my poem captured that connection between heart and Spring. It means a lot to hear it resonated with you.