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Spring's Rhapsody

in the winter’s thaw
as hearts melt . . .
rushing streams sing

June 13, 2019

April 16, 2023 for  A Brian Strand Premiere No 1209 Poetry Contest

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Janice Canerdy

April 20, 2023 at 6:00 AM

GREAT haiku, Andrea. A big CONGRATS on your win. Janice

JC Brul

April 19, 2023 at 9:08 PM

What a majestic haiku! Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

July 2, 2019 at 7:35 AM

Spring does seem to bring a song! Congratulations, my friend!

Janice Canerdy

July 1, 2019 at 1:35 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Andrea! This is really beautiful! Janice

Gershon Wolf

June 18, 2019 at 7:38 PM

Perfect! 'Hearts melt' - sigh. Lovely done, Andrea. :) gw

Panagiota Romios

June 18, 2019 at 3:47 PM

Good luck, to a talented poet with a great haiku Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

June 18, 2019 at 3:42 PM

Wonderful imagery, my friend.

Pandita Sietesantos

June 16, 2019 at 4:41 PM

You are a master - you have mastered so many poetic forms - making it seem so easy as reflected in all your works! Beautiful haiku! Love and hugs. Pandita

Joseph May

June 15, 2019 at 8:32 PM

I like the song of the streams Andrea...Wonderful write...soupmail

Charles Messina

June 14, 2019 at 11:02 PM

Wonderful imagery, Andrea. Perfect!

Alkas Poetry

June 14, 2019 at 3:56 PM

WINTER GOES ON IN THE SUMMER HEATING. THE HEART GENTLY GETS HOT SINGING LOVE SONGS SALUTE DEAR POETESS ALKAS

Janice Canerdy

June 14, 2019 at 10:33 AM

Wonderful haiku, Andrea! Janice

Tom Cunningham

June 14, 2019 at 9:04 AM

Lovely image Andrea. Tom

William Kelii Kekaula

June 13, 2019 at 5:49 PM

A nice blending Andrea--best wishes! Aloha William

John Gondolf

June 13, 2019 at 5:18 PM

Wonderful imagery, Andrea, hearts melt and rushing streams sing. Best of luck in the contest. John

Laura Leiser

June 13, 2019 at 4:49 PM

Lovely verse, Andrea! Sorry pretty! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 13, 2019 at 1:24 PM

- A beautiful song in the spring, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

June 13, 2019 at 11:49 AM

lovely imagery Andrea I find it hard to stray away from 5 7 5, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

June 13, 2019 at 9:10 AM

I really like this poem but it is not really an American haiku. That is 5 7 5/.Some people like short poems more than long poems! Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

June 13, 2019 at 11:32 AM

I do most of my writing for contests, so when you see me doing something you don't understand, just look at the contest I am entering to understand it. you should try the contests. They inspire us to write new things.

Andrea Dietrich

June 13, 2019 at 11:31 AM

It's somebody's invented haiku form , Matt, so I have to do it the way the rule says. There is no name of this form to use except haiku!

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