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Spring's Rhapsody

in the winter’s thaw as hearts melt . . . rushing streams sing June 13, 2019 April 16, 2023 for A Brian Strand Premiere No 1209 Poetry Contest

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/20/2023 6:00:00 AM

GREAT haiku, Andrea. A big CONGRATS on your win. Janice

JCB Brul

Date: 4/19/2023 9:08:00 PM

What a majestic haiku! Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2019 7:35:00 AM

Spring does seem to bring a song! Congratulations, my friend!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/1/2019 1:35:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Andrea! This is really beautiful! Janice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/18/2019 7:38:00 PM

Perfect! 'Hearts melt' - sigh. Lovely done, Andrea. :) gw

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/18/2019 3:47:00 PM

Good luck, to a talented poet with a great haiku Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/18/2019 3:42:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, my friend.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/16/2019 4:41:00 PM

You are a master - you have mastered so many poetic forms - making it seem so easy as reflected in all your works! Beautiful haiku! Love and hugs. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 6/15/2019 8:32:00 PM

I like the song of the streams Andrea...Wonderful write...soupmail

Charles Messina

Date: 6/14/2019 11:02:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Andrea. Perfect!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/14/2019 3:56:00 PM

WINTER GOES ON IN THE SUMMER HEATING. THE HEART GENTLY GETS HOT SINGING LOVE SONGS SALUTE DEAR POETESS ALKAS

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/14/2019 10:33:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, Andrea! Janice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/14/2019 9:04:00 AM

Lovely image Andrea. Tom

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/13/2019 5:49:00 PM

A nice blending Andrea--best wishes! Aloha William

John Gondolf

Date: 6/13/2019 5:18:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Andrea, hearts melt and rushing streams sing. Best of luck in the contest. John

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/13/2019 4:49:00 PM

Lovely verse, Andrea! Sorry pretty! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2019 1:24:00 PM

- A beautiful song in the spring, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2019 11:49:00 AM

lovely imagery Andrea I find it hard to stray away from 5 7 5, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/13/2019 9:10:00 AM

I really like this poem but it is not really an American haiku. That is 5 7 5/.Some people like short poems more than long poems! Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/13/2019 11:32:00 AM

I do most of my writing for contests, so when you see me doing something you don't understand, just look at the contest I am entering to understand it. you should try the contests. They inspire us to write new things.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/13/2019 11:31:00 AM

It's somebody's invented haiku form , Matt, so I have to do it the way the rule says. There is no name of this form to use except haiku!