Spring's Ravenous Kiss

Dewdrops kiss flowery cups and grass shoots
                                               beetling from comatose roots.
                                                Sun smiles with lustrous rays    
                                                  encouraging poised winds
                                                         to blow redolent
                                                         arousing scents;
                                                               enticing
                                                               bug life 
                                                                 back.

                                         Copyright © 2011  By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 9:33 AM
ahh I forgot about the bugs LOL I think we see the ants soon! Light & Love
Horsman Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 12:53 AM
this is excellent Caryl, should do very well in the contest. good luck. Harry
Aul Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Good luck with a great write..........George
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Much eloquence in this one, CAryl. Great descriptions!!
Buckeridge Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Great poem for the 1st day of spring! Liked this very much. :o)
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