Notes About The Poem

18.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Spring's Gold -

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                                                  Whistling
                                             winter keeps us
                                          silent.Cold moments
                                         turn into bright yellow 
                                         buttons along the path.
                                     The coltsfoot has flourished.
                                 A few insects are beginning to stir.
                                  Honeycombs stick sweetly in the 
                                  mouth. Changing surfaces, when 
                                 spring breaks.Makes your stomach
                                  tingle with hypersensitive details 
                                    in this sonnet's time.Everyday
                                      emotions rainbow painted
                                            an verdure sheen,
                                              overwhelming
                                                excitement
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                                                     //                                     @
                                                    //                                 (¯`v´¯)
               @                                   //             @               (¯`(O)´¯)
          (¯`v´¯)                   @          //        (¯`v´¯)            ( _. ._ )
         (¯`(O)´¯)            (¯`v´¯)     //       (¯`(O)´¯)               @ 
          ( _. ._ )             (¯`(O)´¯)    //        ( _. ._ )
               @                  ( _. ._ )                     @     
                                        @
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Dome Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Wow so beautiful, eloquent and clever. Your. The use of language is sublime. What unrivalled talent that has such an inspirational and charm. A favourite. Well done. Made my day. Pete.
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March 21, 2024 at 5:58 AM
Anne-Lise, I am always amazed at how you celebrate nature, spring, and flowers. The juxtaposition of characters is lovely. I think it's all awesome.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 11:13 AM
sweet through and through, Anne-Lise. I smiled as soon as I opened this up! Very nice!
Greenhough Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 8:10 AM
This is an enticing bloom. A perfect announcement of Spring.
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Very creative, Anne-Lise. Lovely images of spring dazzle in your shape poem. Much inspiration--a joy to read.
Rolland Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 7:45 AM
just delicate and wonderful, dear Anne Lise you opened a window, i love to observing insects in sunny days, thanks alot
Edmonds  Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:42 AM
A lovely Shape poem Anne-Lise, very cleverly created… Beryl
Bauer Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 2:34 PM
wow! this is amazing, anne-lise! made me smile!
M  Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 2:13 PM
How lovely and so very creative Sunshine! Debx
Narain Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Creative writing with fone art.
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 12:21 PM
- Jay, thank you very much :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 10:03 AM
You have a knack of writing poetry with a shape on. Lovely poem.
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 12:21 PM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
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