Spring's First Morn, Promise of Those Rising Seeds

Spring's First Morn, Promise Of Those Rising Seeds

When seeking beauty, 'tis the rose I choose
Its flaming reds, 'oft love and truth infuse
And so reminds fine poetry of Keats
Or delicious taste of chocolate sweets
Yet dawn's sweet awakening Shelley sings
That flowers are the purest Heart of Spring!

But mind cries out, what of the yellow rose
Can it dance in the image that you chose
Shout out its songs,  as does a meadow lark
Express its glory- vanquish the deep dark
Will aura of soft rose thy heart imbue
That beauty and truth spirit 'oft renews?

When Spring's waking heart,  radiant truth shows
Dare we ignore majesty of the rose
And awakening,  its beauty inspires
Blossoming spark that sets anew love's fires
How such sights sears into ones heart and mind
Essence of Life and a soul true and kind?

Spring's first morn, promise of those rising seeds
Joy of flowers that a soul often needs
Wafting aromatic smell, sunlit rose
So pleases the eyes,  delights eager nose
Inspiring beauty in its soft splendor
Sings of Love and Kisses sweet and tender!


https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/
5-23- 2021
Syllables counted by, 
The Most Beautiful Flowers You've Seen Blossoming,
This Spring So Far,   Poetry Contest.
Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser

Awarded first place..
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Sambourne Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 9:18 PM
So many fine word couplings in this sublime tribute to roses. "Purest heart of spring" so well penned. Congratulations! Cheers, Brian
Lindley Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Thank you my friend! God bless.....
Lindley Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Thank you my friends! And God bless.....
Koron Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Excellent job! Congratulations on your win! It is very well deserved!
Lindley Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Thank you my friend! God bless.....
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Creative winner. Way to go. The rose is a beauty but not so easy to grow and maintain. Sara
Lindley Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thank you my friend. The rose may rank first with me as it did with my mother but other beautiful flowers are always on its heels vying for that crown! Nature gifts that beauty and we are free to enjoy and admire its handy-work. God bless.
Nicole Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 8:52 AM
"When seeking beauty, 'tis the rose I choose" Me too, my dear sweet friend. There is something enchanting about a red rose with white tips. Your entire poem takes my breath away. Spring is a lovely season to embrace and I am wrapping your thoughts gently around me. :) Brandy
Lindley Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Thank you my friend. My muse came to my aid when I was composing this new creation for the contest. Muse said, look back at what you saw in your youth and how dearly your mother loved flowers, especially the rose. After that the verses just seemed to flow forth. God bless.
Babcock Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 4:28 PM
A lovely tribute to the beautiful rose. This wonderful flower with its sweet aroma given on so many occasions. God bless phyl
Lindley Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thank you my friend. As most would agree --all flowers are beautiful but the rose is a very special one that so often elicits a greater response and romantic feelings when gifted to a beloved.... God bless..
Agustin Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Wow! Congrats! So delightful and delighting from the start til the end... Thanks so much for sharing your talent. God bless you.
Lindley Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Thank you my friend. God bless..
Mcintosh Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 4:18 AM
So beautiful. A inspiration from your heart and sings brilliantly of flower's glory. Abiding in the heart long after it is read. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Lindley Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Thank you my friend. God bless..
Ball Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Ah The rose "Would not a rose by any other name smell as sweet?" Wm. Snakesneer? Shookrear? Ah you know who I mean>;) Love this Robert. Roses are my favorite flower. God Bless, JB
Lindley Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Thank you my friend. God bless..
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 3:46 PM
yes, yes, for me the rose is best!!! I adore roses. You paid them wonderful tribute here with your lovely words, Robert.
Lindley Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Thank you my friend. To me their beauty has no equal. And that it is a great representation of love/romance seals its place in our hearts, souls, minds and spirits. And that reminds me of Poetry. The immense beauty and the place it also takes in our hearts, souls, minds ands seeking/ searching spirits.. God bless..
Daniel Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 8:26 AM
So lovely, Robert, a great gem, love your use of Keats and Shelley reminders, you equal them with this romantic spring beauty:)
Lindley Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 12:39 PM
continued--in fact that entire first stanza came to me in one smooth flow and was jotted down- needed no edits. That set the next verse about the yellow rose, the human mind and the enjoining of poetry, flowers, romance and imagery as a kind of verbal painting. I did the next three stanza and when finished needed only 4 small edits- to meet correct syllable count only.
Lindley Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Thank you my dear friend. To me their poetry (Keats And Shelley's) rivals the inherent and glowing beauty in flowers. As such they and their life's work popped into the verses as I was composing the new piece.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 3:17 AM
This poem is just gorgeous Robert. I wish I could write this well. The Rose in every or any color soothes the senses with its sweet perfume. My husband loved to buy me roses and now I just wait for a bloom in our small Rose garden. I am sure this lovely poem will take its position at the top of the list. I loved it and am Faving it! Blessings xxoo
Lindley Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Thank you my friend. That this poem touched you so and brought memories of your beloved husband and the gift of roses he gave you says a lot about love, roses and romance. Always a blessing when something triggers such beloved memories. And certainly one of the main strengths and purposes of poetry is its many wonderful gifts. I truly appreciate the fine honor of your fav'ing this new creation.. God bless...
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