Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Soon the Hummingbird will appear to feed on all the flowers and weeds that are near..Sara

Spring's Costume

Daffodils and Forsythia bloom
'Tis nigh unto spring's costume
When roses abloom
Birds consume
Feed

'Pon delicate flowers' nectar storeroom
Ah! Releasing spring's perfume
When roses abloom
Birds consume
Seed

Those seed of Hyacinth ancient heirloom
Scattering sunshine not gloom
When roses abloom 
Birds consume
Weed

This form is called a Triquint
It is described on the internet
I hope that I did it correctly
In honor of Brian Strand 
Contest:Any theme/ form 2 to 16 lines

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Bl Devnath January 30, 2012 at 8:57 PM Nice decoration of the Nature with beautiful flowers, birds with costume of Spring, loved and enjoyed. Best wishes for the contest, bl

Robert Johnson January 30, 2012 at 3:30 PM I'm not one for structured prose. I just write where ever it goes. But I'm impressed with all of those. Who write so beautifully of a rose.

Nette Onclaud January 29, 2012 at 7:02 AM can hardly wait for spring with this radiant triquint, sara.... a winning delight! ) huggs!

Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2012 at 10:21 PM Sara, your poem,, is very beautiful... a nice fresh picking of beauty .. i feel like humming along to the bloom,, and the way nature has to play sweet low music,, enjoyed,..p.d.

John Loving Iii January 28, 2012 at 3:20 PM Not quite my style.

Judy Ball January 28, 2012 at 2:40 PM Still it brings memories of my garden in Spring. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire January 28, 2012 at 2:34 PM Beautiful, Sara! Each verse gives us a different look at spring's highlights. I also love the form and how it allowed you to alter the last line just a tad. Excellent entry for Carol's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey January 28, 2012 at 2:09 PM This is a fantastic write my friend! It seems you have become a master of the Triquint as you have written several of them very well! This one is written extremely well! This is a definite tribute to Spring! I could feel the season flowing through me throughout your poem! Fabulous Work!!

Lizanne Scholtz January 28, 2012 at 1:41 PM Enjoyed this wonderful poem Sara, best wishes Elizabeth