Spring's Costume

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Soon the Hummingbird will appear to feed on all the flowers and weeds that are near..Sara
Daffodils and Forsythia bloom
'Tis nigh unto spring's costume
When roses abloom
Birds consume
Feed

'Pon delicate flowers' nectar storeroom
Ah! Releasing spring's perfume
When roses abloom
Birds consume
Seed

Those seed of Hyacinth ancient heirloom
Scattering sunshine not gloom
When roses abloom 
Birds consume
Weed

This form is called a Triquint
It is described on the internet
I hope that I did it correctly
In honor of Brian Strand 
Contest:Any theme/ form 2 to 16 lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/30/2012 8:57:00 PM
Nice decoration of the Nature with beautiful flowers, birds with costume of Spring, loved and enjoyed. Best wishes for the contest, bl
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:30:00 PM
I'm not one for structured prose. I just write where ever it goes. But I'm impressed with all of those. Who write so beautifully of a rose.
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Date: 1/29/2012 7:02:00 AM
can hardly wait for spring with this radiant triquint, sara.... a winning delight! ) huggs!
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Date: 1/28/2012 10:21:00 PM
Sara, your poem,, is very beautiful... a nice fresh picking of beauty .. i feel like humming along to the bloom,, and the way nature has to play sweet low music,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/28/2012 3:20:00 PM
Not quite my style.
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Date: 1/28/2012 2:40:00 PM
Still it brings memories of my garden in Spring. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/28/2012 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful, Sara! Each verse gives us a different look at spring's highlights. I also love the form and how it allowed you to alter the last line just a tad. Excellent entry for Carol's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2012 2:09:00 PM
This is a fantastic write my friend! It seems you have become a master of the Triquint as you have written several of them very well! This one is written extremely well! This is a definite tribute to Spring! I could feel the season flowing through me throughout your poem! Fabulous Work!!
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:41:00 PM
Enjoyed this wonderful poem Sara, best wishes Elizabeth
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