Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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spring's

A poetry form like a Haiku called a Lune invented by Jack Collum and it has 3 words, 5 words, 3 words instead of syllables. 

spring's first hummingbird 
drawn to the nectar available....
lavender clematis blossoms    

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Victor Buhagiar April 20, 2026 at 2:24 AM Loved your new form. I like hummingbirds and clematis. Sara Kendrick April 20, 2026 at 4:48 AM I like uses this one as well, Victor. A person can use a longer word since it is words and not syllables. Thanks for the nice comments. Sara K

Mike Bayles April 19, 2026 at 8:00 AM Such sweet emotions conveyed. Sara Kendrick April 19, 2026 at 1:36 PM Why, thank you, Mike. I appreciate the nice comment. Sara K

Yann Rolland April 17, 2026 at 5:41 PM delicious scenery relating Spring, enjoyed have a sweet Saturday Sara Kendrick April 18, 2026 at 7:32 AM Thank you, Yann. I hope this Saturday improves soon. I woke up with nausea and dizziness this morning, but I think it is getting better after since I took an antivert. Sara K

sara Etgen-Baker April 17, 2026 at 5:35 PM a delightful spring Haiku, Sara K. We've not yet had hummingbirds....maybe in a couple of weeks...hugs, Sara B Sara Kendrick April 18, 2026 at 7:31 AM I hope that you also experience those hummers soon, Sara B., because they are delightful. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K

Darlene De Beaulieu April 17, 2026 at 11:17 AM Hello Sara, It is spring for me when I see the Robin. Now the blue jays and red jays are here. Hugs. Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu April 17, 2026 at 3:06 PM Hello Sara, I see the Robins s often. they love to fluff themself in the bird bath. I like the re jays and blue jays. Hugs. /Darlene/ Sara Kendrick April 17, 2026 at 1:54 PM Yes, we have flocks of Robins to come through in the spring here as well. Thanks for the visit and nice comments. Sara K

Tom Cunningham April 17, 2026 at 11:09 AM I've learnt a new form today Sara, spring is finally here. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom Sara Kendrick April 17, 2026 at 1:52 PM I hope you will use this new form called a Lune and there is another one where it is 3 syllables-5 syllables-3 syllables which was created by Robert Kelly. I have enjoyed trying these. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K