Spring-Fest

Birds

Return
 
Spring-sensed dash
 
Black-V-shaped flaps

Chirp

Trees

Young-glee
 
Offspring's home

Sun-kissed Bloom coat
 
Pleased.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 5, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Good use of imagery in this poem. Enjoyed reading it today. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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June 6, 2011 at 4:24 PM
You say so much in just a few words! How is your publishing venture going? Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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May 31, 2011 at 5:04 PM
this was a great picture of birds and how they act.. I have enjoyed your write tonight. cory
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May 27, 2011 at 12:55 PM
very refreshing, enjoyed reading this creative poem.
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May 23, 2011 at 2:45 AM
very uplifting Lanterne, Caroline. Makes me feel and appreciate the Spring natural excitement..
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May 22, 2011 at 10:54 PM
Very beautiful job Carline. I enjoyed this one as well. Thank you for your kind comments and reviews on my poetry. It makes me happy:D
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May 22, 2011 at 6:41 PM
I liked the words you chose for this poem.. cory
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May 21, 2011 at 3:41 PM
sweet one about spring, Caroline. I liked that word you made with young-glee together. Those two words really meld! Luv, andrea
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May 21, 2011 at 6:28 AM
beautifully worded the fest of Spring, caroline
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May 20, 2011 at 10:59 PM
* “Sounds Almost As The Raptures Post Eras Moment Amid Paradises Promise * Dear Blessed & Beautiful CarolineCecil * Short Sweeet & Pleasant Tis The Moment Brushed In Its Lovely Arrays of Colours In Visions * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *
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