SPRING WHISPERS

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petal secrets drift~
the wind hums in cherry tongues
bare feet press the earth

11th grade12th gradespringhaiku

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Line Gauthier

March 25, 2026 at 1:47 PM

delightful ~

Sara Kendrick

February 20, 2026 at 5:08 AM

I remember the days when we went barefoot sometimes and for some it was all the time, Sara B. My father said his daddy would buy them shoes, but they did not wear them except when they absolutely needed them. I enjoyed reading this Haiku and the accompanying artwork was really nice. Sara K

Dorothy Gibbons

February 20, 2026 at 4:19 AM

I really love this poem Sara especially " bare feet press the earth " I visiliged my feet doing this.Makes me feel in awe of nature.??

Paige Hind

February 19, 2026 at 7:57 PM

lovely as those whispers!!

Eve Roper

February 19, 2026 at 3:36 PM

beautiful imagery and feeling

Daniel Henry Rodgers

February 19, 2026 at 10:53 AM

Dear Sara, your writing always carries this gentle clarity that feels both lived-in and luminous. I’m grateful every time I get to read something new from you. Winter Blessings, Sara, Daniel