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Spring Waters

DEW gathered on grass- a fawn woke from the brambles to quench her thirst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 12:43:00 PM
You paint a peaceful scene with your words in this one. You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/22/2010 9:33:00 AM
such a refreshing haiku, Tara! It's pretty vivid too, enjoyed reading this & thank you so much on your wonderful comments in my sestina :)
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