Spring Waters

DEW gathered on grass-
              a fawn woke from the brambles
to quench her thirst
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 10, 2010 at 12:43 PM
You paint a peaceful scene with your words in this one. You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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May 22, 2010 at 9:33 AM
such a refreshing haiku, Tara! It's pretty vivid too, enjoyed reading this & thank you so much on your wonderful comments in my sestina :)
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