David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

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Spring Unbelts

spring ~ unbelts


                  snow fields turn to melt
                tulips open sunshine’s felt 
              lambs bleat where ewes knelt 
                  
                  
Spring Haiku - Traditional Form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
Syllable counter PS 5/7/5
27/03/2021

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Kai Michael Neumann April 14, 2021 at 3:03 AM Very nice tribute to spring. David Kavanagh April 14, 2021 at 5:56 AM Heya kai, probably my favorite season, as the sun inexorably rises higher each day, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich April 5, 2021 at 5:29 PM Still liking those rhymes! Congrats on the win, David. David Kavanagh April 6, 2021 at 6:18 AM Thanks Andrea, I can’t get away from rhyming at the moment, but can feel a change of style in the air, hopefully it’s for the better, cheers David

Jan Allison April 5, 2021 at 1:02 PM Dropping back with many congrats on your win David:-) jugs Jan xx David Kavanagh April 5, 2021 at 2:52 PM Heya Jan, I just made the cut, always delighted to get a placement thank you so much for dropping in, always welcome, cheers David

Kim Merryman April 5, 2021 at 12:36 PM A lovely picture and it rhymes! Congrats on your win, David! Blessings, Kim M David Kavanagh April 5, 2021 at 2:55 PM Heya Kim, oh I go through phases of rhyming tankas and haikus, sometimes it works, was delighted with the placement, cheers David

Tania Kitchin April 4, 2021 at 7:56 AM David, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet and unique haiku! David Kavanagh April 4, 2021 at 8:37 AM Heya Tania, thank you so much for the placement, I’m delighted with it, enjoyed very much writing for your contest, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2021 at 4:53 PM cool rhyming KU! David Kavanagh March 27, 2021 at 5:55 PM Heya Andrea, thank you ku, cheers David

Jan Allison March 27, 2021 at 3:24 PM lovely spring imagery, never seen a rhyming haiku before! i especially love that final line it is so accurate!:-) Jugs Jan xx David Kavanagh March 27, 2021 at 3:50 PM Heya Jan, thanks for the comments I’m going through a mono rhyme phase at the moment, I’m still tinkering around with the title on this one, contest only allows one word after spring, hey you said Jugs Jan again, brilliant lol, cheers David