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spring ~ unbelts snow fields turn to melt tulips open sunshine’s felt lambs bleat where ewes knelt Spring Haiku - Traditional Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Syllable counter PS 5/7/5 27/03/2021

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/14/2021 3:03:00 AM

Very nice tribute to spring.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/14/2021 5:56:00 AM

Heya kai, probably my favorite season, as the sun inexorably rises higher each day, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2021 5:29:00 PM

Still liking those rhymes! Congrats on the win, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/6/2021 6:18:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I can’t get away from rhyming at the moment, but can feel a change of style in the air, hopefully it’s for the better, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2021 1:02:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win David:-) jugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/5/2021 2:52:00 PM

Heya Jan, I just made the cut, always delighted to get a placement thank you so much for dropping in, always welcome, cheers David

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2021 12:36:00 PM

A lovely picture and it rhymes! Congrats on your win, David! Blessings, Kim M

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/5/2021 2:55:00 PM

Heya Kim, oh I go through phases of rhyming tankas and haikus, sometimes it works, was delighted with the placement, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2021 7:56:00 AM

David, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet and unique haiku!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/4/2021 8:37:00 AM

Heya Tania, thank you so much for the placement, I’m delighted with it, enjoyed very much writing for your contest, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2021 4:53:00 PM

cool rhyming KU!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/27/2021 5:55:00 PM

Heya Andrea, thank you ku, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2021 3:24:00 PM

lovely spring imagery, never seen a rhyming haiku before! i especially love that final line it is so accurate!:-) Jugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/27/2021 3:50:00 PM

Heya Jan, thanks for the comments I’m going through a mono rhyme phase at the moment, I’m still tinkering around with the title on this one, contest only allows one word after spring, hey you said Jugs Jan again, brilliant lol, cheers David