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A spring Haiku poetry contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5/14/25

 

spring time

playful little lambs gambol in the lush green grass ~ fledglings spread their wings
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Horne Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 4:01 AM
beautiful picture here
Beaufort Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 7:46 AM
Jan, Nice work! You're making me think about spring for not just myself, but for all creatures. The poem does a great job helping us realize we're not existing in isolation. A lot is going on. Smiles!!
Kitchin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Jan, a delightful haiku, congratulations on your first place win.
Godwin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:59 AM
A fresh sip of a vision ... CayCay
Goldsmith Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love spring and I love your write and cute pictures. Have a blessed day with your win.......
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Great entry, Jan. Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 7:06 AM
Back with congrats, dear Jan, on 1st placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 7:08 AM
I just read your poem to my 10 year old grandson and taught him a new word “gambol.” :)
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 5:51 AM
- Congratulations, Jan :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 7:37 PM
cute and joyful!
Doll Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 1:33 PM
Jan, wonderful haiku and perfect pictures to match~ Warren
Godwin Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 8:32 PM
I don't see near enough of you, so hard to get around Soup w/ a plan, plans don't work as far as what/who I do. Beautiful entry, Jan. I've hardly gone outside for months, but Spring has surely sprung on soup and continues to. Man, I just thought of all the Springs you and Andrea have spent on Soup, writing Spring poems. You both bloom fresh ideas despite that fact. Miss ya ... CayCay
Buhagiar Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 7:48 AM
Your haiku is sensational. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 11:07 AM
- A lovely spring poem, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Bauer Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 9:31 AM
sounds like a winner to me, jan! a lovely description of spring!
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