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A spring Haiku poetry contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5/14/25

playful little lambs
gambol in the lush green grass ~
fledglings spread their wings

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2025 4:01:00 AM

beautiful picture here

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/29/2025 7:46:00 AM

Jan, Nice work! You're making me think about spring for not just myself, but for all creatures. The poem does a great job helping us realize we're not existing in isolation. A lot is going on. Smiles!!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/23/2025 11:28:00 AM

Jan, a delightful haiku, congratulations on your first place win.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/23/2025 9:59:00 AM

A fresh sip of a vision ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2025 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love spring and I love your write and cute pictures. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2025 8:16:00 AM

Great entry, Jan. Congrats.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/23/2025 7:06:00 AM

Back with congrats, dear Jan, on 1st placement!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2025 7:08:00 AM

I just read your poem to my 10 year old grandson and taught him a new word “gambol.” :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2025 5:51:00 AM

- Congratulations, Jan :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2025 7:37:00 PM

cute and joyful!

Warren Doll

Date: 5/19/2025 1:33:00 PM

Jan, wonderful haiku and perfect pictures to match~ Warren

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/15/2025 8:32:00 PM

I don't see near enough of you, so hard to get around Soup w/ a plan, plans don't work as far as what/who I do. Beautiful entry, Jan. I've hardly gone outside for months, but Spring has surely sprung on soup and continues to. Man, I just thought of all the Springs you and Andrea have spent on Soup, writing Spring poems. You both bloom fresh ideas despite that fact. Miss ya ... CayCay

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/15/2025 7:48:00 AM

Your haiku is sensational. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2025 11:07:00 AM

- A lovely spring poem, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/14/2025 9:31:00 AM

sounds like a winner to me, jan! a lovely description of spring!