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Spring Tide

Horizon stretching
azure shades midst rolling waves
spring tides unleashing.





a haiku from your window for Michael J. Falotico's competition
written by Déirdre Ó Maidín

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Robert A. Dufresne

February 20, 2011 at 4:54 AM

excellent entry, Deirdre. The reader is there. Good luck in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2011 at 11:11 AM

wow, how did I miss this awesome one? So wonderful, Deirdre.

Eamon Duffin

February 12, 2011 at 10:35 AM

Hi Deirdre. Thanks for the visit,. I am working on some prose at the moment and planning our trip to Germany. Loved this. You are fantastic at Haiku. Makes me long for long days and beach weather. Great piece, purely atmospheric. Eamon

David Byrne

February 7, 2011 at 11:11 PM

like a painting!

Audrey Haick

February 7, 2011 at 6:27 PM

Best of luck in Michael's contest, Deirdre. Very picturesque Haiku...beautiful! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

February 7, 2011 at 1:58 PM

So you can see the sea from your window as well, Deirdre. Really love the description of the waves in that second line. It's so nice to see those azure shades on calm days. Today's we're having a storm and the waves are pretty fierce -- grey and stormy. Best wishes in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn