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Spring Tide

Horizon stretching azure shades midst rolling waves spring tides unleashing. a haiku from your window for Michael J. Falotico's competition written by Déirdre Ó Maidín

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/20/2011 4:54:00 AM

excellent entry, Deirdre. The reader is there. Good luck in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2011 11:11:00 AM

wow, how did I miss this awesome one? So wonderful, Deirdre.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 2/12/2011 10:35:00 AM

Hi Deirdre. Thanks for the visit,. I am working on some prose at the moment and planning our trip to Germany. Loved this. You are fantastic at Haiku. Makes me long for long days and beach weather. Great piece, purely atmospheric. Eamon

David Byrne

Date: 2/7/2011 11:11:00 PM

like a painting!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/7/2011 6:27:00 PM

Best of luck in Michael's contest, Deirdre. Very picturesque Haiku...beautiful! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 1:58:00 PM

So you can see the sea from your window as well, Deirdre. Really love the description of the waves in that second line. It's so nice to see those azure shades on calm days. Today's we're having a storm and the waves are pretty fierce -- grey and stormy. Best wishes in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2011 12:41:00 PM

wonderful and totally descriptive, deirdre! best of luck to you! :) huggs, nette